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2ndplaceracer's I'm Bad at Life

Chapter 22
Feedback by Riguel*2000 - 08/13/17 - 06:45AM
"I think Iíve got the secretly being a hopeless romantic figured out, itís the not fucking everything up part that I feel I canít grasp." That line was really good, fun and cute and yes, romantic too. I like how realistic the story is, with its pace and doubts and slow moments. They are still in the let's get to know each other phase and being long distance, of course, it is taking a while and it should. Thanks for not rushing things. You're doing just as well as Ronnie in that department, ;-)

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Chapter 18
Feedback by Riguel*2000 - 07/20/17 - 07:04AM
Nice update! (I do like that Lana Del Rey song, btw.) I like how you describe very realistically the internal monologue of Julianne and how she keeps on comparing herself and what she is used to with her new environment and the people she meets but I also like that you don't fall into the easy clichť of making the richer or fancier people nasty with her, because money doesn't make people nice or nasty, I think, often they are one way or the other regardless of what they have ont hei rbank account. It's just they have different habits and ways of life and you have to adjust. So this story keeps on being really good and quite realistic!

2ndplaceracer's response: Thank You! Deciding what song to use was a struggle for me. It was originally going to be Off To The Races, but I felt that one was too fast to be able to put internal monologue between. Then I almost picked Cola because of the "I got sweet taste for men who're older. It's always been so it's no surprise," but it was way to sexually fueled of a song for her to pick at this point. And yeah keeping everyone normal but just having her be in shock basically about everyone being normal humans instead of some kind of better group was something that took a bit to figure out how to subtly work in. I'm having fun with it so I'm glad you're enjoying it!

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Chapter 16
Feedback by Riguel*2000 - 07/13/17 - 05:00PM
The jealous bitchy ex is already tracking her down. I hope Ronnie can do something or convince her soon that she shouldn't pay attention to her texts...

2ndplaceracer's response: Bitches be crazy.

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Chapter 13
Feedback by Riguel*2000 - 06/29/17 - 06:20AM
I tried to recall the first time I flew but really don't have that much memory of the flight. I remember Inwas excited about it, but not at all scared. I guess everyone deals with it differently, and the character in the story has more reasons to be nervous besides flying. Hopefully she'll get relaxed on the longer flight and won't be too freaked out when she sees Ronnie again after she lands!

2ndplaceracer's response: I've never flown, so I had to do my best to make it work, without her suddenly just appearing in California!

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Chapter 10
Feedback by Riguel*2000 - 06/17/17 - 06:21PM
Ronnie seems to have a nice track record at choosing his female friends... Hopefully things are about to turn out much better with his current long-distance date...

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Chapter 7
Feedback by Riguel*2000 - 06/17/17 - 06:14PM
Ah... The friend / acquaintance that always knows what's best for you and manages to take you on a guilt trip about what you were all enthusiastic about earlier on...

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Chapter 4
Feedback by Riguel*2000 - 06/15/17 - 10:28PM
Awww... This was a nice way to end their encounter, and give her a choice to maybe have another one. Curious too see what she'll do...

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Chapter 3
Feedback by Riguel*2000 - 06/15/17 - 10:26PM
That's the kind of night snack and company I would very much enjoy... I like how this is slowly developping. You're really good at creating an atmosphere in your writing.

2ndplaceracer's response: My favorite part is making the atmosphere. I try my best to use references, to look at social media and go "okay, how can I relate this to what I'm writing." So I'm trying to make it fit with real life events as much as I possibly can, so I'm glad to hear it's working! Thank you for reading!

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Feedback by Riguel*2000 - 06/12/17 - 09:42PM
I have no clue who this band is but I like your writing style. I'll give this story a try as if it were a short novel since I don't know the musician in it.

2ndplaceracer's response: Thank you! I appreciate it. I'm working on getting it up as quick as possible.

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