I like the way you integrated the poem into the text. It was like another layer to the story. Mustaine's inner thoughts were really interesting throughout, sad though, and the ending was quite heavy, I had to read it twice. Oh, and, "Now he's miles away from that other slut." :) Who might that be, I wonder.
Julietds's response: Thank you dear! That's one of my favorite poems, I'm glad it fitted with the story. Also I'm fond of drama, in case you couldn't tell. Haha. The romantic triangle reference is open to suggestion, so...let there be crack pairing fantasies, I say ;) Sorry for the late reply and thanks again for your support!
It's rare to read a fic where Mustaine is so insecure like this. I liked the alternative perspective, although it was a little unsettling to read Bruce as a slightly cold and emotionless guy (or was that just Mustaine's paranoia talking ?) Great use of the poem too, it seems to tie the whole story together well. I really liked this. Well done!
Julietds's response: Thank you very much! You got it right, I wanted to portrait Bruce as seen through Mustaine's eyes, considering the whole story was written with his pov. I wanted to expose Dave's more tender and insecure side, the one that induces him to be wary of his lover since he got it bad and he's afraid of losing such a "free spirit" as Bruce. Anyway I hope it wasn't too confusing, I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
Ah, I love that last line! Damn these two are crazy! —xyliana, for sgSixx's Bad Motherfuckers
Fucking brilliant. So well done... I applaud you. You were dealing with some really complex characters here are you've done it masterfully. They're real humans. The emotions are raw and twisting, and Ritchie's jab at David about dying of a broken heart made me laugh in the middle of this piece, which is hardly a funny one. I have a feeling that this is the kind of story that every time you read it, you notice something else or something different jumps out at you, so I know I'll be returning to it. Thank you for this and nice work. —therealgloria, for BaronZemo's California Scheming
Holy crap I loved everything about this!! That's all I got. Seriously this is awesome ❤ —CrazyInBC, for Mrs_Dark_Knight8's Anything Goes Tonight