I like the way you integrated the poem into the text. It was like another layer to the story. Mustaine's inner thoughts were really interesting throughout, sad though, and the ending was quite heavy, I had to read it twice. Oh, and, "Now he's miles away from that other slut." :) Who might that be, I wonder.
Julietds's response: Thank you dear! That's one of my favorite poems, I'm glad it fitted with the story. Also I'm fond of drama, in case you couldn't tell. Haha. The romantic triangle reference is open to suggestion, so...let there be crack pairing fantasies, I say ;) Sorry for the late reply and thanks again for your support!
It's rare to read a fic where Mustaine is so insecure like this. I liked the alternative perspective, although it was a little unsettling to read Bruce as a slightly cold and emotionless guy (or was that just Mustaine's paranoia talking ?) Great use of the poem too, it seems to tie the whole story together well. I really liked this. Well done!
Julietds's response: Thank you very much! You got it right, I wanted to portrait Bruce as seen through Mustaine's eyes, considering the whole story was written with his pov. I wanted to expose Dave's more tender and insecure side, the one that induces him to be wary of his lover since he got it bad and he's afraid of losing such a "free spirit" as Bruce. Anyway I hope it wasn't too confusing, I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
Haha, I loved how Henkka provoked Alexi about Perttu like that! And that last scene got me going a little bit, not gonna lie. Too bad Alexi is so damn protective of his precious cars! Thanks for the fun Halloween story, lady! —speakingez, for Riguel*2000's Bodom Before Midnight
okay there were so many things i loved about this chapter, i love how matt gets forgetful, then oversharing at once. and omg ben was so bold! Actually im surprised matt didn't explode when Ben kissed him hahaha anyways, i can't wait to see what happens next! *awaits patiently* —notoffkilter, for Luftballons's The Great Syrup Accident