Oh, i didn't expect much it to be written, but you wrote it! And it's beautiful! I love this. Really. All i wanted was this.
Picturing teenage Ozzy and Tony running wild and laughing like maniacs in the dark was so damn cute. Tony is having fun with someone he thought was nothing alike. It's always good to see when something you unexpected happends and you enjoy it.
I didn't have much of my thoughts or desire of what the characters gonna be like in their teens (they could be just like what we all know or maybe not) but i can say that i really enjoyed your characterization.
My favorite thing was Ozzy offering Tony joint with his mouth!! And acting like it's normal, definitely not a sexual thing. How did you know i love those kind of things?! Aaaaaah. I love this so much i couldn't breathe.
Thank you so much for your amazing work. I wish there were more lovely Sabbath fics like this.
I hope my poor English didn't disturb expressing my delight and gratitude. Merry merry Christmas! : )
This story really touched me. I'm such a sucker for a meeting-your-crush/idol het fantasy like this one, and I just thought it was wonderful and I enjoyed your writing style. The last line, "It remained forever" really got me. Oh, wouldn't such a situation be so great, it gives me the chills. Thanks for sharing. —Pigatron, for British_Daydreamer's Love And Reasonings
This Yngwie is an interesting fellow. You did such a nice job of describing his thoughts about Joe as he watched the video, what he'd like to do to him, and why. I must say I identify with Yngwie's situation here, because really, who hasn't been, well, ah, moved in such a way from watching a music video, haha. —Pigatron, for BaronZemo's Can't Break Away From Your Spell