Thr inner monologue of poor Jason io brillint- IF it is Jason
Julietds's response: Theoretically, it could work! Tbh, Jason as narrator would twist my view on this story a little, since the one who's talking is Dave. A still-crazy-in-love-with-his-old-flame Dave. These two have more than one thing in common, though!
Gotta say, I really like your Matt. I think you've really captured the essence of him as a person and I like the way you write young Ben, as well. —Luftballons, for notoffkilter's Congratulations
This story really touched me. I'm such a sucker for a meeting-your-crush/idol het fantasy like this one, and I just thought it was wonderful and I enjoyed your writing style. The last line, "It remained forever" really got me. Oh, wouldn't such a situation be so great, it gives me the chills. Thanks for sharing. —Pigatron, for British_Daydreamer's Love And Reasonings
This Yngwie is an interesting fellow. You did such a nice job of describing his thoughts about Joe as he watched the video, what he'd like to do to him, and why. I must say I identify with Yngwie's situation here, because really, who hasn't been, well, ah, moved in such a way from watching a music video, haha. —Pigatron, for BaronZemo's Can't Break Away From Your Spell