And that's where Steve felt the other man press closer to him, their bodies molding until he felt the heated hardness poking at the back of his thigh, telling more than a thousand words ever could. That's where he understood....
Characters: Bruce Dickinson, Steve Harris
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Geddy takes another step to the edge of the pier. The water churns wildly below him, and the salty air invades his lungs. What looks so blue and playful in the daytime, turns into the embodiment of fear at night. If he slipped on the dampened wood, there would be little preventing the sea from claiming him. Geddy steps closer, until he’s at the edge of the pier.
Ah, I love that last line! Damn these two are crazy! —xyliana, for sgSixx's Bad Motherfuckers
Fucking brilliant. So well done... I applaud you. You were dealing with some really complex characters here are you've done it masterfully. They're real humans. The emotions are raw and twisting, and Ritchie's jab at David about dying of a broken heart made me laugh in the middle of this piece, which is hardly a funny one. I have a feeling that this is the kind of story that every time you read it, you notice something else or something different jumps out at you, so I know I'll be returning to it. Thank you for this and nice work. —therealgloria, for BaronZemo's California Scheming
Holy crap I loved everything about this!! That's all I got. Seriously this is awesome ❤ —CrazyInBC, for Mrs_Dark_Knight8's Anything Goes Tonight