Oh God, I’m so happy you’ve updated this story! It’s one of my favourites and... it also reminds me I should (and I will) update "I disappear" soon. Oops. Whatever, let’s focus on this beautiful chapter! I waited for what seemed to be ages since I love "Under glass", and it was definitely worth it. I love the way you write and man, the atmosphere of the first part was reeeally cool. It’s almost like James wanted to sink into his blackness before clarifying with Kirk. "This body – which chicks liked so much – needed another brain" ...killer quote, let me say. However, blondie decided to go visit his beloved, little Danish friend locked up into room A-125, the only place James knows he’s welcomed. I was waiting for this moment so much I almost wanted to slap Lemmy (RIP) when he came in. Unfortunately or not, Professor Kilmister has its ways so we got to know that Kirk and Jason spoke to him.
At this point, the whole situation was supposed to be taken pretty seriously if I hadn’t started to laugh SO HARD when "even the verruca on Lemmy’s cheek looked homiletic and powerful". Dude, that part brilliant haha.
However, Lemmy’s speech was terrifically cruel and, somehow, right. It was very honest and brutal. Very Lemmy, I guess. For a while, I wondered - and I’m still wonder - if Lars was gonna end like the above-mentioned flower, murdered by one or more of the scientists with some acid. Guess I’ll have to wait to know! Lastly, the end was bitter as expected but also perfect, considering the turn taken by the events. I can’t wait to know what James’ll choose to do. I know he’ll do the right thing... as Lemmy said, he’s a good man. So, here we are! Great job, my friend. I’ll be holding my breath for the next chapter! :D
—Julietds, for Monti's Under Glass.