Oh what a rollercoaster ride!!! I enjoyed this so very much. It's getting more and more complicated and tensed and I'm loving it. I had so many emotions reading it. I feel with everyone, especially Duff the poor bastard. Must be hard to have a fucked up marriage at home but stay away from Gretta anyway. Btw, Gretta is just awesome! The 'disgusting, sweaty, hairy bastard' was just hilarious :D I enjoyed the whole excitement after the show, one of the best feelings when the crowd was awesome and you practically fucked their heads xD Izzy and Lauren are a sweet pair, the kiss was very cute :) Then the kiss between Ava and Axl- surprising that she let him. The whole Ava/Axl/Slash triangle is so damn fuckin' excting, cause there are so many possibilities and I can't wait what happens next. All of them in one bus...uh...the poor managment, but it was great! By the way, Axl telling about his free week...I think he has really fallen for Ava I could sense he's so tired of woman wanting to please him, giving themselves without any difficulty for him. Think the challenge is thrilling for him and Ava is definitely a challenge! But what's with Slash...we know he wants Axl, even if he doesn't really know by himself. We know Axl wants Ava. And what the fuck does Ava want? The way he lookef at Axl while Slash sleeps on her tits was a little provoking I think, at least that's what I imagined it like. Maxbe she's just playin with Slash to get Axl....but then they both do, cause ok...Slash dreamt of her, he finds her attracting, but nothing more or? So they both want Axl and instead of fighting the make out? Oh please continue soon, your descriptions of everything are sooo great and I can't wait what happens next, babe ♥ Ya' know I am freakin' over that chapter x'D —Moon, for lali's Love, Booze and a Load of Guns
Izzy and Slash have been dancing around one another from the very start. Checking each other out, like kissing each other on that trip to Mexico. The point is that the intent has always been there for both of them. With Duff and Axl it was simply a reaction to a very fucked up situation. They weren't constantly coveting each other behind their partner's backs. And ok, so Duff shouldn't have hit Slash. But then again, Izzy shouldn't have helped make him a junkie.
No sympathy for Slizzy. That's my campaign slogan! Terrific update from a perceptive Steven!
—starpupil, for slashsgirl's Through the Eyes of...