great to see an update. but chapter 2 got posted twice?
still made me laugh, different but like it —Eni, for Wildchild's Revenge of the Chemical Toilet
:-o You're cruel to leave us hanging like that.
I enjoyed Axl's rant as it came pouring down on him. I'm actually one of those freaks who enjoy taking walks in the rain, hehe. ;) —DeadWidow, for JanisJk's If I Were You