“I don't know why I do it. It's like I can't stop it. I feel suffocated when someone gets too close. They want to take care of me. I've never had that in my whole life, Slash. I'm just not used to it.”...
Characters: Axl Rose, Slash
[S] - WIP - Last update: 03/27/13
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Lorelai Rose is a young girl who doesn't know where she's going in life, which is why she agrees to accompany her closest girlfriends to the glamorous city of Los Angeles (circa 1985). When she gets caught up in the vortex that is Guns N Roses, she discovers someone that may understand her more than she thinks, and someone who needs her more than she realizes....
Characters: Axl Rose,Duff McKagan,Izzy Stradlin,Slash,Steven Adler
[G] - WIP - Last update: 03/25/13
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I must be sentimental tonight, but I think 24 chapters into the story, you've finally revealed the deeper meaning behind the title. ;) It started out as a game, but now there are all these shades and shadows of depth and feelings behind it all.
"He doesn't fully understand how to love a person because he doesn't love himself and you can't seem to let down your walls and be vulnerable to another person." This spoke to me.
"...the challenge is piecing yourself back together, so that when you meet the one who will keep you whole you can give them all of your pieces." It was with this that I finally realized what a complex and deceiving title you've chosen to call this story.
And you kept going: "the greatest challenge is to love unconditionally."
The dialogue moved me. Really well done! —DeadWidow, for Panther's Challenge
Really sweet and sensual. There are a few little bits of language that need a tiny bit of work, but nothing that can't be fixed ;) —Architect, for NataliaAlvarez17's Infinite Dreams