Dave sighed and let himself fall back against the bed beside Taylor. He stared up at their reflection in the mirror. His eyes drifted over Taylor's body, slowly taking him all in. Finally, his eyes found Taylor's. He smiled. Taylor smiled. He could read just what type of smile that was on his lover's lips. ...
Characters: Dave Grohl,Taylor Hawkins
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I was going to just leave a comment after I finish this whole thing, but I had to speak up on this chapter. It's beautiful, and your writing makes it completely believable. I don't think the singing metaphor was cheesy, either. Perhaps it would come off that way if we weren't talking about these guys specifically, but it's perfect here. Oh, and I loved your line "despite every cell dying with pleasure" - le petit mort, one of my favorite phrases. :) —nonnymouse, for Lisbeth Laufeyson's The nightingale that taught the raven to sing